November 13- How To Scan a Hedge
There are spires in the dun chaos,and the tinder of small fires, but these cannot be seen by looking. The hedge is alien to the eyeball with its mind waving on stalks. A rose gold ring with heavy...
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Alison, this is my favorite of yours so far this month. That close is just spectacular: Then it will be miraculously found, like the one who looks at the hedge from the grey sidewalk and sees they are...
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Hi Chris, yes, you're right. All circles--but some circles all but vanish under the weight of the showy part. It's bit awkward there... needs work
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Love this section especially -- spiderworks and days to translate: hangs in the mid-spiderworks, flashing its barrel aqua stone. Don’t touch it. It has something for the hedge, that will take days to...
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It's hypnotic, seems to work a kind of magic on the reader. And rewards multiple readings!!
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You just blew me away with the opening on this (to tell the truth, the first line itself knocked me out):There are spires in the dun chaos,and the tinder of small fires, but these cannot be seen by...
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